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Another one.

Post by foamy on Sat Jul 21, 2012 4:11 pm

Its titled "Glass Sculpture"

C:
Out of all people in this world
And all the terror that's unfurled
I'm just one crack in this glass sculpture
That shows that this world has no structure

V1:
Earth is like a glass sculpture- fragile, breakable
And people are the ones breaking it. 
The people that are incapable 
Of terror won't crack it
Then where do I fit in? I'm not perfect
I know what I do isn't right
I treat some people not with respect but with neglect
I feel like I'm in a fight
I crack the glass so easily, cleanly
So perfect that it is about to break
My treatment of people is obscenely
Terrible, the walls of hope are opaque
I can't see what will happen in my future
Malevolence is everywhere, its presence is felt
It's presence is like a computer
Or like a casino where cards are dealt
Everywhere is meant when it I say
Sure it won't make a difference now
But what about when no one can stay
Here on the planet? Here in the town?
How am I supposed to know what hell's like?
I don't think I've been there
But if we continue our treatment of life
I think we'll all go there

C:

V2:
We treat each other like dirt, right
Please raise your hand if you don't
See? Thought so, how many here lie?
So ashamed that responding they won't 
All you need to do is speak
So your conscience may be quieted
The future will be very bleak
Many will probably have rioted
The streets will be cluttered, all people
And they all have something to say
They were once influenced by evil
But have escaped it today
Try to avoid a bad influence
That I never really do
Bad choices are continuous
And they hurt people too
Please friends, take my advice
I don't want to see others hurt
Don't leave it to a roll of the dice
Or you will get your just desserts
Take this glass sculpture, keep it
It serves as a reminder for you
And do something and mean it
Because I need to do something too

C:

B:
Don't be a victim be a solution
Don't be a jerk, or a confusion
Don't be like me, an illusion 

C:

B:
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Re: Another one.

Post by KarmaChameleon on Mon Aug 13, 2012 10:15 am

Very nicely written. This might be my favorite of all

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Re: Another one.

Post by Selrahc on Mon Aug 13, 2012 7:18 pm

Wow, that's really beautiful! Much better than anything I could do...

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Re: Another one.

Post by foamy on Mon Aug 13, 2012 8:29 pm

Now u people reply. Only took almost a month.
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