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My love Poem

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My love Poem

Post by Darth Pyrinikon on Tue Aug 14, 2012 12:43 am

When I think of you my heart soars,
My love for you louder than a lions roar.
Because of this I know one thing is true,
It's that I am in love with you.
I can't fathom how happy I'd be,
If you ______ would go out with me.

Its still a work in progress, and im open to suggestions Smile

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Happy...insulted.......sad..........thinking it over...figure that IDGAF..get really hyper..be happy again..repeat  bom
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Re: My love Poem

Post by foamy on Tue Aug 14, 2012 12:45 am

Let's see...the blank could be please. Split up It's in line four. If that's it I think it's good otherwise.
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Re: My love Poem

Post by Darth Pyrinikon on Tue Aug 14, 2012 12:47 am

The blank is for my crushes name Smile i just decided to leave it out in case she gets on the site Razz

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~Eric was here~
The progression of my day (usually)
Very Happy.Razz.Wink.....Neutral.........pale sad Crying or Very sad...........confused................drunken............................bounce...........lol!
Happy...insulted.......sad..........thinking it over...figure that IDGAF..get really hyper..be happy again..repeat  bom
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Re: My love Poem

Post by foamy on Tue Aug 14, 2012 12:51 am

Oh. Well you could always make it "generic" by puttin the please.
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